Heehee, 很有诗意!
To kit: Would you like to take a look at my version for the following paragraph? Only a little bit different. No offence, just think it would be interesting :)
and now I cannot break away ,
(现在, 我已无法摆脱)
their sweet bouquet disappears, like the
vapor in the desert,
(它们甜甜的花束消失了, 就象沙漠中的蒸气一样)
so take a warning, son.
(所以,当做是一个警告吧,我的孩子。)
windflowers,Ancient windflowers,
(windflowers, 古老的windflowers)
their beauty captures every young
dreamer who lingers near them,
(它们的秀丽征服了每一个徘徊在它们附近的年轻追梦者)
but Ancient windflowers,I love you.
(古老的windflowers, 我爱你。 )